Book One — Tracking the Rewrite
PUBLICATION OF
THE REVISED BOOK ONE
HAS BEGUN!
Dear Travellers,
Publication of the revised BOOK ONE began on 22 July.
After six months of rewriting, restructuring, and returning to the desert alongside Yves and Midnight, I am so, so exhaustedcited to have finally reached the point where I can begin sharing their new beginning with you.
The graph below was originally posted to chart my progress throughout the hiatus between January and July 2026. As you can see, the overall rewrite is not yet complete. While the revised opening chapters continue to appear, I shall be working steadily on everything that follows.
For the time being, the graphs will therefore remain here and will be updated regularly. They are partly a means of keeping this humble duck motivated, but you are, of course, very welcome to follow the progress of the rewrite and expansion of the first five chapters, leading up to the appearance of the Behemoth.
Returning to BOOK ONE after venturing so, so far into the frozen Albweiss with Yu has been demanding, but also deeply rewarding. I have greatly enjoyed rediscovering these early chapters and shaping them into something that, I hope, offers both returning and new readers a stronger beginning to the journey.
Thank you kindly for your patience throughout the hiatus. I am working hard each day to remain ahead of the regular chapter uploads, and I am very glad to be sharing the story with you once again.
WRITING PROGRESS
— 406 PAGES IN TOTAL
WEBSITE PROGRESS:
- BOOK ONE: Took down original story
- BOOK TWO: Renamed all chapters
- BOOK TWO: Chapter summaries
- Website: Corrected all Glossaries
- Website: Corrected all music and image references
- Sleep
WEBSITE PROGRESS:
- BOOK ONE: Took down original story
- BOOK TWO: Renamed all chapters
- BOOK TWO: Chapter summaries
- Website: Corrected all Glossaries
- Website: Corrected all music and image references
- Sleep
While I am working on the story, I have also been making a bit more music on the side.
From time to time, I will be sharing new tracks here, some growing out of the same moods as the story itself, others silly things that come from somewhere else entirely. The most recent one is The Silent Call, a lovesong (?)
Have a listen, if you feel like stepping a little deeper into that atmosphere — or away from it?
